NEYDA ESLAVA

3. Writing became such a process of discovery that I couldnt wait to get work in the morning: I wantted to know what I was going to say.  "Sharon O´Brie"
Type of paragraph: Narrative

 OUTLINE

Abbreviation	Explanation	Your sentence
T.S	A topic sentence expressing the point of view clearly	The desire of man to translate his deepest feelings, thoughts and actions into writing is a process of discovery.
S.S #1	A supportive sentence	This discovery has allowed man to satisfy this need for expression by communicating what is within himself.
Ex. S.S	an example sentence of the supportive sentence	For example, primitive man discovered through writing that he could tell his experiences, and for this he began to write on the rocks narrating the daily events.
A.I	An author’s idea supporting the supportive sentence (second source)	Garrido Ramírez defines here the writing as the enabler of expression, of explanation, of synthesis; a beautiful opportunity to transform, create, know, externalize.
S.S #2	A new supportive sentence	On the other hand, writing reveals as a mirror the ideas and emotions as an experience of perception of reality in an act of reflection and awareness.
Ex. S.S	An example sentence of the supportive sentence	A clear example of how writing allows to cross the limits of the perception of reality, is the diary of Anne Frank, a Jewish girl who narrated from his experience, the horrors of war.
A.I	An author’s idea supporting the supportive sentence (second source)	Habermas (1990: 211) states that "writing allows us to face reality from different perspectives, avoiding to restrict it to a single form of worldview."
C.S	A conclusion sentence.	In short, man as a strong need for expression feels the imperative obligation to translate on paper what exists within him as an act of self-revelation.
R	References APA	Campillo, R. M. (s.f.). The relation of power between the interpreter of life and its text: literature as a narrative of historical experiences .Obtenido de http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0185161613714471 Ramirez, M. C. (s.f.). Ponencia: La escritura como acto creador.Obtenido de https://media.utp.edu.co/referencias-bibliograficas/uploads/referencias/ponencia/ponencia10pdf-ssOLj-articulo.pdf

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     The desire of man to translate his deepest feelings, thoughts and actions into writing is a process of discovery. This discovery has allowed man to satisfy this need for expression by communicating what is within himself. For example, primitive man discovered through writing that he could tell his experiences, and for this he began to write on the rocks narrating the daily events.  (Ramírez) defines here the writing as the enabler of expression, of explanation, of synthesis; a beautiful opportunity to transform, create, know, externalize. On the other hand, writing reveals as a mirror the ideas and emotions as an experience of perception of reality in an act of reflection and awareness. A clear example of how writing allows to cross the limits of the perception of reality, is the diary of Anne Frank, a Jewish girl who narrated from his experience, the horrors of war. Habermas (1990: 211) states that "writing allows us to face reality from different perspectives, avoiding to restrict it to a single form of worldview."

Questions and answers from classmates about the paragraph ..

Do you think that the only way to face reality from different perspectives is writing?

 According to your question, it seems quite convenient to me Habermas's sentence about how we can cross the limits of the perception of reality and this sentence gives us a clear example of Anne Frank who found in her writing a way to express her pain and impotence on the difficult situation that she was living at that time, because she knew that it was the only way she could do it at that time. I do not think writing it's the only way to face reality, but it's quite important.

Don`t you think that speaking is also a good way to face reality from different perspectives?

And with respect to the other question, speaking is one of the ways in which we can also express our perception about the world that surrounds us because it is another way of saying what I think. Through it I can face the person who has another thought different from mine and express my points of view and communicate with others face to face be.   Although through writing we are more capable of writing without fear everything that is inside us because it does not limit us as it can be the speaking in many occasions.